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Design \ Poster/ad | 04/10/06 @637 | eye4u | critiques (5) | views (598)

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I developed an online japan auctions website for a client using php, he wanted me to create a banner for his advertisement compaign that he can use in magazines, so This is what I finished with,

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Diane

04/10/06 @684

The composition is nice but the girl seems to be floating. I think that a different background colour would be nice (the same green as on the girl's dress for example). You should also use the same font everywhere, it would look better. The car is nice

Valera

04/10/06 @708

I agree about the font...and i agree about hte car

eye4u

04/10/06 @714

i have designed its beta version

but i thought to post one art at a time so will be posting the next one tomorrow

however thanks for good suggestions it will help me to improve my work

eshine

04/10/06 @733

I was just thinking that about the font. I think one or two fonts that compliment each other are good. Also the sentence: "When its about to buy Cars from Japan...."
Are you meaning "its" as in the company? If so, I think it should be "it's" as in "when it is".
However it might sound better and more personal to say something like "When we are" or "When we're".

I love the placement of the car image and the text on the side as well as the gradient background!

Almost-Human

04/10/06 @857

I also dont understand what the message is !
When Buying Cars from Japan... ?????????

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